the rushed unrealistic end was a real turn off and to top it off you FAILED to give a second chapter and proper end. XXNX it seems more likely that the kids would go to the moms and say ” we agree to parts one and two but if you insist on part three we will tell our dads everything. It’s like you spent a couple of days writing the first part, but them you got in a hurry and just finished it all in one big paragraph to get it over with. this would have got a posative vote IF you hadn’t fucked it up so bad but as is it gets a NEGATIVE vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-12 17:42:02the end killed the story, why would they even allow the moms to watch.

Actors:
Jessa Rhodes / Kylie Nicole



















