I like how the story flowed in the beginning, but I felt it was a little rushed toward to end. Xnx I like how you have written parts of the story from Clare and Dean points of view. I like your style. ;)«12» I like how the story flowed in the beginning, but I felt it was a little rushed toward to end. I like how you have written parts of the story from Clare and Dean points of view. Write part two! Being more graphic would detract from the romance. Story telling is a lot like love making. Write part two! Anon reader did said some good key points about it. I would have liked it if you were more descriptive of Claire and Dean’s feelings about what was happening to themselves and their thoughts about what their partner might be feeling.
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