The story line was ok. Xnx 14 comments«123»olddogcummer1Report 2021-08-02 09:27:35all 5 chapters were great , want moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-10 00:01:32I had a hard time keeping the continunity going, because you don’t know how to paragraph. Heck I was tempted to go when I was 18 but it was to far away.READERReport 2007-06-21 20:02:48are you serious bubaroski? anyway back to regular stuff, it doesnt matter if grammer and spelling has some mistakes, its a sex story, not a dictionary, you did good work with the story, cant wait to read part 6, keep at it dude. 10/10READERReport 2007-06-21 18:45:38turned me on«123» Theres like 3 places I believe in Canada that I know of you can drink at 18. Heck I was tempted to go when I was 18 but it was to far away.READERReport 2007-06-21 20:02:48are you serious bubaroski?
