PLEASE WRITE MORE … PLEASE WRITE MORE … XXNX This is definitely one of the top four stories on this whole site. Once again, absolutely superb, well done, and keep ’em cumming ;)Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 20:16:34Very nice love story. 6 comments«12»Penneypad23Report 2011-07-06 03:10:38no her eyes weren’t green at the beginning, mia’s wereREADERReport 2009-05-26 02:03:50nothing more than the best on this site good jobTheOneTrueGodReport 2009-05-26 00:02:52I have many things to say about this story. You should proofread your stories before submitting them.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 19:25:53wow… This is definitely one of the top four stories on this whole site. This is definitely one of the top four stories on this whole site. It’s plot could be made into that of a real book… A kid with dead parents moves in with rich adopted family…it would need an antagonist, ect., but it is possible.
