4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-14 23:51:13Did you write this is five minutes? Xnx This was shit.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-20 11:14:14Good story,bad writing thoughanonymous readerReport 2013-07-20 05:23:24well i like it the spelling adds to the story to me next please ;)anonymous readerReport 2013-07-18 03:30:49another badly spelled load of trash from an illiterate schoolboy, just when you think these stories cannot get worse you get this, gave up after the first paragraph of text speak«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-14 23:51:13Did you write this is five minutes? This was shit.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-20 11:14:14Good story,bad writing thoughanonymous readerReport 2013-07-20 05:23:24well i like it the spelling adds to the story to me next please ;)anonymous readerReport 2013-07-18 03:30:49another badly spelled load of trash from an illiterate schoolboy, just when you think these stories cannot get worse you get this, gave up after the first paragraph of text speak«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-14 23:51:13Did you write this is five minutes?
