Way too short. XXX Too easy.READERReport 2004-03-25 19:42:13Too short«12» Way too short. Way too short. This is my first errotic story. Way too short. Way too short. This is my first errotic story. Way too short. This is my first errotic story. This is my first errotic story. Way too short. Way too short. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-31 14:38:43Ever hear of spellcheckREADERReport 2004-04-16 12:31:35Please don´t write more storiesREADERReport 2004-03-30 16:09:04Hey guys, give me a break. i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar. Too easy.READERReport 2004-03-25 19:42:13Too short«12» i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar. Way too short. i’m sure I’ll get better as I start writing more.READERReport 2004-03-30 13:25:46Bad set up and grammar.




















