I liked how original it was hopefully you do continue on with the series ^.^ it could go really far an there are so many possibilities with the set up. XXX you need to build up to that shit.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-17 17:56:37it has potential , but needs to be slowed down , other then that excellant job«1» Put more description into how it stretches her and makes her feel like its tearing her apart as it enters her. I liked how original it was hopefully you do continue on with the series ^.^ it could go really far an there are so many possibilities with the set up. Remember, you’re starting off with your power character too, he should be tearing it up!
