2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. Xnx Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories. I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise.
