also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted. Xnx If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted. If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. It would have been fine
