Illogical spacing, some shocking spelling and a story I couldn’t even follow.«1» Ok, you could expand some more on the ideas in there but that only adds to the potential 8/10 good effort.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-04 20:30:06Apart from typos (everyone makes mistakes,) it’s a great story. Ok, you could expand some more on the ideas in there but that only adds to the potential 8/10 good effort.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-04 20:30:06Apart from typos (everyone makes mistakes,) it’s a great story. XXX Ok, you could expand some more on the ideas in there but that only adds to the potential 8/10 good effort.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-04 20:30:06Apart from typos (everyone makes mistakes,) it’s a great story. Ok, you could expand some more on the ideas in there but that only adds to the potential 8/10 good effort.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-04 20:30:06Apart from typos (everyone makes mistakes,) it’s a great story.
