You were either to intoxicated to write or you have an absurdly poor grasp on reality. Crap terrible. XXNX The plot was ridiculous. It served only to advertise your incompetence, lack of talent and laziness. Instead u had her kill and eat her. It’s an odd story, but a good one. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-23 08:01:23I like it. In either case, your attention to spelling, grammar and even character names was pitiful.Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-23 12:42:382HO THE HELL WOULD THINK OF A
STORY LIKE THIS. Keep on writing!Sarah ParkerReport 2015-11-15 00:57:43This story was a waste of time. You were either to intoxicated to write or you have an absurdly poor grasp on reality. Dumb fucker.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 13:59:53I bet it would be so hot to eat your teenage daughter.«12» THE FUCKER WHO WROTE THIS IS DEMENTED AND SHOULDN’T BE WRITING STORIES IF THEY WRITE STORIES LIKE THIS.Anonymous readerReport 2015-04-13 09:37:47Some advise never
