i liked the story. Xnx it was pretty good. i liked the story. it reminded me of my own relationship. hey, man. flowery description, but its cut short by spelling and grammatical errors. i read it all the way to the end. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2005-08-16 03:18:55that’s not cool. flowery description, but its cut short by spelling and grammatical errors. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2005-08-16 03:18:55that’s not cool. i liked the story. hey, man. i liked the story. i read it all the way to the end. especially if your writing two novels. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2005-08-16 03:18:55that’s not cool. you can try harder with those. hey, man. it reminded me of my own relationship. i gave it an eight out of ten,READERReport 2005-07-17 10:13:41veryvery dumb«1» especially if your writing two novels.
