Perhaps you could add a little it more detail to the sex parts of the story, telling more of how she sucked his cock and more about how he entered her cunt and licked her juices up and how the two orgasamed, shooting their respect cum down each others throats.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-27 22:19:56I think it was a good story.. XXX But short… But short… Perhaps you could add a little it more detail to the sex parts of the story, telling more of how she sucked his cock and more about how he entered her cunt and licked her juices up and how the two orgasamed, shooting their respect cum down each others throats.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-27 22:19:56I think it was a good story.. It was a little short and needs to be a little bit longer. needs to be a bit longer :-)) Will be waiting for more…Anonymous
