if you made that far…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-26 22:44:35As I read the story I wondered if English is your first language. Clearly english isn’t your native tongue or if it is you barely made it through the 3ds grade… Xnx The sentence and paragraph structure is as awkward and clumsy as mine is in Spanish and German. Also, I don’t understand your use of possessives. if you made that far…anonymous readerReport 2010-11-26 22:44:35As I read the story I wondered if English is your first language. The sentence and paragraph structure is as awkward and clumsy as mine is in Spanish and German. The sentence and paragraph structure is as awkward and clumsy as mine is in Spanish and German. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-25 23:21:29You sound like a man that is processed but certainly not one who is possessedanonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 16:26:24I have to agree with the first comment.
