also very short and characters appear very immature and flighty.«12» I ran to his room and gave him a hug and felt his boner in his pants” Pants?? XXX I ran to his room and gave him a hug and felt his boner in his pants” Pants?? Using more descriptive language would really help, what does her pussy, ass, etc smell like, look like, think about the five senses. also very short and characters appear very immature and flighty.«12» Love the anal play and hope it continues. i thought he was nude? Using more descriptive language would really help, what does her pussy, ass, etc smell like, look like, think about the five senses. also very short and characters appear very immature and flighty.«12» keep writing you’re doing a good job!anonymous readerReport 2013-03-26 15:01:00Wheres the next one..they make me cum every timeanonymous readerReport 2013-03-19 18:55:43I am enjoying this
