10 comments«12»James Dylan DeanReport 2017-03-18 07:37:44Yes, you could use a proof reader. 10 comments«12»James Dylan DeanReport 2017-03-18 07:37:44Yes, you could use a proof reader. Xnx this was goodanonymous readerReport 2012-05-25 17:16:42To first commentor: Your grammar isn’t great and his is far better than yours. You could continue on this story, too.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-20 03:03:33This was great write more like thisanonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 01:44:44Ur should have her getanonymous readerReport 2012-05-26 21:23:55is there gonna be a pt3???? Then so could I on my stories. Don’t be a hyprocrite.«12» You could continue on this story, too.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-20 03:03:33This was great write more like thisanonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 01:44:44Ur should have her getanonymous readerReport 2012-05-26 21:23:55is there gonna be a pt3???? Then so could I on my stories. 10 comments«12»James Dylan DeanReport 2017-03-18 07:37:44Yes, you could use a proof reader. I like how you took a real life situation and expanded on it.
