Thanks for contributing!Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-22 03:01:12i am a long time reader and i can honestly say this is a really good story 10/10 keep it up and make a part 2 to this plz i liked itBx17Report 2009-06-20 06:53:37Very nice job!!!!crimpsonsunReport 2009-06-20 01:28:38Not bad but try to lengthen it and give more detail and storyline. XXNX 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-10-02 20:25:40A little ratainolity lifts the quality of the debate here. Thanks for contributing!Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-22 03:01:12i am a long time reader and i can honestly say this is a really good story 10/10 keep it up and make a part 2 to this plz i liked itBx17Report 2009-06-20 06:53:37Very nice job!!!!crimpsonsunReport 2009-06-20 01:28:38Not bad but try to lengthen it and give more detail and storyline. Thanks for contributing!Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-22 03:01:12i am a long time reader and i can honestly say this is a really good story 10/10 keep it up and make a
