And centairly use the hint about there being two more girls /guys like him.Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-21 12:46:29Glad someone is reviving the seriesanonymous readerReport 2013-12-12 20:38:13convoluted,,, disjointed,,, in parts even hard to comprehend what you are writing about«123» If you really need a translation, cut and paste into a facebook message, then translate from there. I hope you give it a twist instead of just “bang sisters, all romantic with juliet, story out”. XXX Like the style, well written with good English. And centairly use the hint about there being two more girls /guys like him.Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-21 12:46:29Glad someone is reviving the seriesanonymous readerReport 2013-12-12 20:38:13convoluted,,, disjointed,,, in parts even hard to comprehend what you are writing about«123» I hope you give it a twist instead of just “bang sisters, all romantic with juliet, story out”. Some writing tips:
Go for an open setting and try to keep the characters believable.
