again I enjoyed your work.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-08 16:20:23This is based on the story of Johanna Spiry’s famous book Heidi.So except the sexual part nothing is new.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-08 16:10:32Awesome!!!!!!!!!&Sexxxy!!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2010-08-07 17:05:03i think the story is great keep it going.how about john with lily and peter with heidi. The paragraphs just seem to run together. XXX However this format is very difficult to read. The paragraphs just seem to run together. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-20 14:39:30The story is okay. And I’d like to see a third chapter. As someone suggested a foursome up on the mountain. The paragraphs just seem to run together. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-20 14:39:30The story is okay. However this format is very difficult to read.
