I got lost within the first 15 sentences – not worth the time to try and follow – – punctuation really helps if you really want it to be read«1» A bit of editing, and this story would be fabulous.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 01:14:39Giant wall of solid text = not even attempting to read since author didn’t even attempt to make it readable. A bit of editing, and this story would be fabulous.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 01:14:39Giant wall of solid text = not even attempting to read since author didn’t even attempt to make it readable. XXNX So negative vote instantly.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 00:33:53paragraphs?? Venice, Athens and Istanbul are NOT on the Baltic Sea. Venice, Athens and Istanbul are NOT on the Baltic Sea. I got lost within the first 15 sentences – not worth the time to try and follow – – punctuation really helps if you really want it
