9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 21:28:44You know, periods and comas are your friend. XXNX But great story keep it going.«12» 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 21:28:44You know, periods and comas are your friend. But great story keep it going.«12» But great story keep it going.«12» 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 21:28:44You know, periods and comas are your friend. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 21:28:44You know, periods and comas are your friend. You need to learn to use them. But great story keep it going.«12» 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 21:28:44You know, periods and comas are your friend. But great story keep it going.«12» It’s a good story that could be better if you took a few extra minutes to read over your work before posting it.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-14 07:52:52harry /hermione part awesomeanonymous readerReport 2012-02-19 15:52:07so lets have the next parts to the storyanonymous readerReport 2011-12-30 23:43:16hermoini is incredible wow i always wanted her with harry thoughanonymous readerReport 2011-06-02 10:06:35Well I
