The English language was not my strong point«12» I remember some of my cousins :)Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-22 22:07:34try to make it a lil bit longer but itwas a good story..Patty AlReport 2010-05-19 21:51:33I would like to ask, what is more realistic then this actually happening. XXX The English language was not my strong point«12» The English language was not my strong point«12» 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-12-07 19:42:21best thing you can do is DELETE everything and stop writing forever. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-12-07 19:42:21best thing you can do is DELETE everything and stop writing forever. The English language was not my strong point«12» IF you want to save this series DELETE it and get a GOOD WRITER to rewrite it and have THEM repost it you suck at writing.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-07 23:19:17Yeah I agree that the spelling errors made this tough to read but the content was OK. . …A bit rushed though. . …Made me
