keep them cummmmming.READERReport 2005-09-27 12:38:00Archaic sums it up fairly well. All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? Xnxx How in the world could anybodsy say this was a good story???READERReport 2005-09-25 23:01:45Good, hot and fast. It ruined the story totally. keep them cummmmming.READERReport 2005-09-27 12:38:00Archaic sums it up fairly well. Best of luck!READERReport 2005-09-26 11:18:28Well, now we have the titmans perspective. The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired. The language was average (please never ever say ‘love tunnel’ again), the structure was OK, the plot left a little to be desired. All in all an OK story, for a 16 yo.READERReport 2005-09-26 04:56:29where in the world did this “writer” learn English? not bad«12» It ruined the story totally.




















